The case studies get shorter as you go along! The first one is detailed with some nice technical analysis, which you still need to illustrate with stills from the music video. You also need to add a section explaining which elements will help with your own ideas. The second is less detailed and you could add more analysis of representation, genre, technical elements. The third is very brief. All three need videos and stills embedding and there are some serious problems with proof reading! Vanessa
You have worked really hard on your improvements and have produced very detailed case studies and it is very clear to see how they have helped you to come up with your own ideas. Well done! The only weakness is that there are still some typos / mistakes! Vanessa
The case studies get shorter as you go along! The first one is detailed with some nice technical analysis, which you still need to illustrate with stills from the music video. You also need to add a section explaining which elements will help with your own ideas. The second is less detailed and you could add more analysis of representation, genre, technical elements. The third is very brief. All three need videos and stills embedding and there are some serious problems with proof reading! Vanessa
ReplyDeleteYou have worked really hard on your improvements and have produced very detailed case studies and it is very clear to see how they have helped you to come up with your own ideas. Well done! The only weakness is that there are still some typos / mistakes! Vanessa
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